Overview
Comments:
Hello, Please see the attached prospectus with feedback. It has taken me several hours to go through this document, and I was disappointed to see little difference from the one you submitted in Week 6 of last term, on which I added considerable feedback. Please read the prospectus's Appendix first to understand what you are asked to do. Then, think CAREFULLY about your research—the general and specific business problem, the research purpose, the research question(s), the conceptual framework, the theories, etc. Write this in a Word document and make sure that these all fit together BEFORE adding content to the various sections of the prospectus. I want to send the next version you submit to the second committee member for an informal review.