Overview
Revise the literature review based on all the comments and advices. also the resources!
PLEASE, MUST FOLLOW THIS INSTRUCTIONS, AND THANK YOU VERY MUCH.
I attached the draft document, which is the literature review that need to be revise. and please please read all the comments and rewrite the paper. also, you have to add these references articles to both the paper and reference list. PLEASE FOLLOW APA STYLE.
Here are the references need to be add in this article: (i'll also upload some of them in the attachment section)
https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/full/10.1080/2331186X.2023.2270289
https://www.mdpi.com/1660-4601/17/18/6716
https://drpress.org/ojs/index.php/EHSS/article/view/826
https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/full/10.1080/00224499.2015.1137272
https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/full/10.1080/00224499.2018.1437593
also, this literature review have a few problems need to be fix as well, 1. the early part of the paper is scattered, and redundant, explained some points several times, such as about gender hierarchies and about tongqi. Please fix this. 2. more gaps or fleshing out that needed to happen towards the first half of the paper. 3. add all the citations using references link I gave above. I will also upload the paper I can access from the links above.