Overview
Please see the attached document with feedback. You revised the Prospectus and incorporated feedback from the Week 6 assignment. However, several changes are still needed. For example, in the annotated bibliography summaries, you must check the links you included, as some are not for the articles you included. Also, some dates are incorrect, so you cannot use those sources. There are typos, spelling errors, repeated phrases, highlighted sections with my comments still showing, etc. My role as your Chair does not include proofreading, so please thoroughly edit your work before submitting the next draft of your Prospectus. Also, please think carefully about the population you intend to use for the primary research data collection. You noted SMEs in the banking and financial services sectors in NH. You should separate the two and choose either the banking services sector or the financial services sector. Are there SME banks? What kind of companies fall into the financial services sector? You have two terms in the 9100 class to have an approved Prospectus, so getting on with it is a good idea. My advice would be to spend some time and get it right rather than rushing to submit it and then having it returned by the second committee member.