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I need to get a review to incorporate the feedback and to check the week 7 assignment is also good.Feedback for Research Paper Topic
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Riley, I’m confused on your citing of cases in the first paragraph on the first page? Racial profiling is a solid topic, but we need to work on your thesis statement. Read it out loud to someone and see if they understand what you are saying. Try to write in less of a conversational tone, but in a professional one. I also recommend reconsidering absolutes such as “every single time.” The first sentence of your second paragraph on page two is closer to a thesis statement. |