Overview
For your initial post, review your email inbox. Note any work-related, business-related, or any other type of professional communication email. These could be from professionals, bosses, coworkers, or a business that you use (for instance, a bank or other company that emails you as a client or customer). Without providing names or other identifying information, copy and paste the communication. Next, list the ways this communication could have been more effective had it followed the guidelines provided in Chapter 4 Revising Business Messages. In your response posts, review the email example of a classmate. Based on their suggestions and ideas of your own, revise the provided business communication utilizing the suggestions provided in Chapter 4 Revising Business Messages.