Overview
The attached wordy, inefficient, and disorganized messageinvites department managers to three interviewing sessions to select student interns. However, to be effective, this message desperately needs a radical rewrite. Your Task. Study the message and list at least five weaknesses. Then revise to avoid excessive wordiness and repetition. Also, think about how to develop an upbeat tone and improve readability. Can you condense this sloppy 14-sentence message into 6 efficient sentences plus a list—and still convey all the necessary information?