Overview
I have attached my final draft along with my professor’s feedback and notes. I need you to carefully revise and edit my paper according to her comments.
Please:
- Incorporate the suggested additions (especially more textual evidence for both parts)
- Reduce repetition throughout the paper
- Improve clarity, coherence, and academic language
- Ensure the argument remains strong and consistent
- Keep the word count within the required limit (max 4000 words)
- Maintain the original structure unless improvement is necessary
Make sure all edits directly follow the professor’s notes and improve the overall quality of the paper.