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cold you help me improve my essay
- In your description of territoriality for the social media post, I think you should talk more about how authority was exercised in the private space of the woman’s home. What does this story prove about one’s control over their own space, in this case, their home? Who has power? This can tie into and expand your section on contested space for the same post.
- In the section on reporting, I'd like for you to write a sentence or two about which kind of source (national/international, local, or personal) you prefer to view when you are engaging in news. How does the natural of the reporting affect you when you read/see what is being reported?
- It would be nice if somewhere in the paper, you connected what you were writing to a specific class concept we learned during lecture or a discussion class. (you will find the lectuers attached)