PLEASE READ EVERYTHING I AM WRITING: Before making any edits, please read the essay, the assignment prompt, the sample essays, and my teacher's comments. My teacher is very specific about the structure and style she wants, so the essay must stay as close to the current version as possible.
The essay is currently AI assisted (but it took me forever to just get it to the current version because of all the edits she made on my last draft), so my goal is simply to make the wording sound more natural and human. I do not want the essay rewritten. I only want wording-level changes so that the writing is NOT AI AT ALL.
Please do not change the style, structure, argument, reflection, analysis, source connections, paragraph organization, or overall voice of the essay. The way the essay is currently written is intentional, and I spent a long time developing both the ideas and the structure.Please do not change the organization, argument, examples, reflections, source connections, paragraph structure, or overall writing style. The essay is written this way intentionally, and I spent a long time developing both the ideas and the structure.
The only thing I want changed is the wording. Please rephrase sentences where necessary so the language feels more natural and personal, but do not make the writing more formal, academic, sophisticated, or complicated. This is extremely important. I do not want advanced vocabulary, overly polished phrasing, or language that sounds like it was written by a professor. I want the voice to remain straightforward, reflective, genuine, and easy to follow. If a simpler sentence works, choose the simpler sentence.
Please do not:
- Add new ideas or arguments.
- Remove reflections or analysis.
- Rearrange paragraphs.
- Change the relationship between sources.
- Replace simple language with more advanced vocabulary.
- Make the essay sound more academic or intellectual.
- Make the essay sound like a different writer.
- Change the style or format of the essay.
Please do:
- Keep the same meaning and overall tone. (MY BIGGEST WORRY IS THAT IT IS GOING TO BE FANCY WORDING AND I DO NOT WANT THAT AT ALL) (I WANT THE TONE TO SOUND THE SAME AS THE DRAFT THAT IS LINKED HERE NAMED: ESSAY 1 DRAFT 2) I'm sorry for saying it over and over, but my teacher is very strict on EVERYTHING. I need my essay to sound like the samples she sent and follow the format in that screenshot I sent. It is currently that way, and I want it to remain that way. For example, the analysis is highly reflective, and the quotes almost talk to each other. That's how it must remain. Please also fact-check all my sources using the links in the works cited.
- Preserve the reflective style.
- Maintain the connections between sources.
- Keep the writing clear, natural, and student-like.
- Make only wording-level edits when necessary.
- Focus on making the essay sound more human while keeping everything else the same.
- Keep the language simple and genuine.
If you are unsure whether to change something, it is better to leave it alone. The goal is not to create a new essay. The goal is to preserve the essay exactly as it is while making the wording feel more naturally written by a student.
INSTRUCTIONS
Format
- ion on the reader: the essay should contain clear examples of the events or situations that prompted your thinking. An essay that simply summarizes the issue does not fulfill the objectives of the assignment. All claims should be connected to evidence. There should also be evidence of your thinking. Aim for direct responses between texts (if you are writing on more of a philosophical conversation than a debate, this might take more work, since you’ll have to explain the different contexts from which the texts speak to the issue you are describing). Use reflection and transitional language to show how you see the examples connecting to each other. Give your essay a thoughtful title and include page numbers. WE NEED TO MAKE SURE THAT MY ESSAY IS FOLLOWING THIS PROMPT EXACTLY.
FINALLY: PLEASE SEND A TURNITIN REPORT ONCE COMPLETED SO I KNOW THERE IS NO USE OF AI
You are the best, thank you so much!! If you have any questions, please let me know! I really need an A on this essay(and shes the hardest grader I know, so let's kill it!!