Overview
Step 1: Identify key areas for improvement (150–250 words)
Write a brief reflection that outlines your planned revisions. Consider the following questions:
• What feedback are you building on?
• What aspects of your original passage feel unclear, off-track, or disconnected from your audience?
• What are your main goals for revision (e.g., improving flow, making ideas more precise, adjusting tone)?
Tip: Think of this step as setting your intention for revision. This isn’t about fixing errors; it’s about making your writing stronger and more effective.
Step 2: Revise your passage (175–250 words)
• In a single document, paste your original passage.
• Below it, include a revised version that reflects the changes you planned.
• Focus on improving clarity, organization, and tone. You can rework sentence structure, reorganize ideas, or revise language to better connect with your audience.