Overview
Assignment1
I ned revisions and edits done to Chapter 1-3. my professor comments are on the side. make the changes and highlight them yellow. I am also attaching the dissertation guide. I will need this by Thursday (not to much to do).
Assignment 2-
create a rough draft essay. I will attach my outline that receivef 25/25 on it. I need this by Saturday.
professor comments on my outline- This looks good. You can focus more on your own ideas, opinions, experiences, surveys, interviews, and/or other types of original evidence to be sure your voice is at the forefront of the essay. By having your sources sorted out in the outline, the rest of the drafting can lean into your voice.