Hi everyone,
I am seeking academic support for a rewrite and paraphrasing of my CIPD Level 5 – Unit 5OS01 (Specialist Employment Law) resubmission, following assessor feedback on similarity and originality
Important: Please read the assessment requirements very carefully and thoroughly before responding. This unit is highly detailed, and strict adherence to the brief, grading grid, and CIPD academic standards is essential.
Context
- AC 1.1 has already passed (Low Pass) and must NOT be edited.
- All remaining ACs were referred due to high similarity (Turnitin score 60%).
- The assessor requires a full rewrite in the learner’s own words, demonstrating clear understanding, strong paraphrasing, and wider reading.
Key Requirements (Non-Negotiable)
✔ Rewrite referred ACs entirely in original wording ✔ Do not copy or lightly edit existing text ✔ Change sentence structure, not just vocabulary ✔ Write as if explaining the concept to someone else ✔ Demonstrate clear understanding of employment law concepts ✔ Use multiple credible sources (CIPD, legislation, case law, academic texts) ✔ Apply UK employment law context (NHS scenario as per brief) ✔ Follow UK English (NOT US spelling) ✔ Use Harvard referencing correctly ✔ Align each answer explicitly with the grading grid (High Pass descriptors) ✔ Ensure changes are clearly visible using:
- Strikethrough for removed text
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Blue font for rewritten content
✔ Stay within the original word count (3900 ±10%)➤ Please note that the current submission already exceeds the word limit, therefore the rewrite must be significantly reduced (approximately 50% of the current content) while fully meeting the assessment criteria.
✔ No AI-generated content
✔ Final work must pass Turnitin similarity checks
Scope of Work
- Task: 10 scenario-based email responses
- Assessment Criteria: AC 1.2 – AC 4.3 only
- Structure must follow AC numbers as headings
- Include case law and recent developments where required
- Reference list must remain accurate and properly cited
Deliverables
- Fully rewritten answers for all referred ACs
- Clear alignment with assessor feedback
- Academically sound, original, and professional writing
- Turnitin-safe content suitable for CIPD moderation
If this aligns with your experience, please get in touch.
Thank you.