Overview
Please revise my article base on the comments given by my supervisor:
1. In 1.1 Risk Communication Theory part, you only provide 1 reference. And when i check the reference, they are talking about different model and conceptual framework.
(Write more for how did you come out the conceptual framework.)
2. For hypothesis development, it has to involve few literature. One or two past studies is not enough to conclude the hypothesis. E.g. only reference [7] used to conclude the hypothesis 1, and reference [8] for hypothesis 2.
3. For the discussion part, you have to discuss how the findings contribute to the body of literature and the theory. From the statistic findings that you have found, how they explain the role of Risk perception and risk prevention in the risk communication process.
4. Insert the in-text citation into article.
(APA style, at least 50 in-text citations. you can use the reference in reference list)
5. Do a proofwriting of your aricle, fix grammar.
I have attached a sample article for your reference, which is my supervisor give it to me. Let me know if there are questions!