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Hi, I need my research paper corrected.
I have marked all passages that need correction in blue with a green explanation below.
In addition, (VERY IMPORTANT), the whole paper lacks in-depth use and explanation of a theory used for this research paper. I think the paper needs the brand identification theory and also the social identity theory involved. Therefore, it needs a strong explanation of the theory at the right spot in the paper. For example, why is part of who I am / member of this group?
Additionally, it needs the following for the research questions and studies for the future:
research would be interviewing foreigners in the country, asking them why they are connected to the club, and asking them questions. Needs a few questions involved in the paper.
why is there tension between local and global fanbase probably due to geography…