Overview
- conduct an annotated bibliography following the professor's guidelines as described in the attached file. This is the feedback towards my research proposal:
Focusing on the youth and the affects of being surveilled is a fine topic. See the actual places where I highlighted in your document. Avoid the overused "three idea" topic - "how surveillance shapes privacy, freedom, and behavior." It does not give you the chance to truly explore ideas.
If you were to make this research paper unique and original, what more can you do?
- Utilize the scholarly journal article linked to conduct the annotated bibliography. If you feel that this source is not good enough, let me know I will find a different one. Thank you.