Overview
PEER REVIEW (2-3 sentences minimum; be descriptive and specific with your feedback--general statements are not productive for peer reviewing)
A. What is the main argument (thesis statement) of this paper? Is it clear from the introduction paragraph what this essay will cover? What do you think about their thesis? Is it compelling and why or why not?
B. Which parts of the draft are the most clear to you? What are most vague?
C. Does the paper answer all parts of the required prompt? Which part(s) can be more elaborated?
THE BASICS - check or mark what is present in the current draft.
❏ Includes short synopsis or descriptions introducing the two shows to the reader.
❏ Discusses television shows as (2) constructs and makes an argument using (1) critical frame.
❏ Refers to specific moments in episodes to illustrate the main point (textual analysis).
❏ Utilizes 6 sources (4 academic sources).
E. Comment on writing style or organization: What is done well and what are your suggestions for improvement?
Additional comments, concerns, praises?