Health & Medical Question

Post ID: 3463063

Overview

Revise the first submission based on feedback from peer reviews. Specify your revision using a different font color or yellow highlight to notify the instructor of your changes. Accepting the comments is up to you; however, you must explain why you did not accept them in the revision table. Use others’ feedback only to improve your paper.

Work on the Result section 3.3
- Summarize a study including the interpretations of OR/RR/HR and 95% CI.
- Interpretations in your own words (see a template or a sample paper for more details).
- Each paragraph for each study.
Work on the Discussion section:
- Summarize the main research findings by answering the question, “How strong is the risk factor associated with chronic disease outcome?” and discuss the clinical and public health implications in one paragraph.
- If you found conflicting results from 4 studies (correlation and 3 abstracts), include potential reasons for the conflicted results in another paragraph.
- Comments from paper that needs to be corrected for paper:
- missing a few factors such as a risk factor in the title, missing OR/HR/RR and 95% HR, only one chart and explanation provided for section 1.2, included two charts for correlation analysis.
- Revise the title by specifying the risk factor of your research topic.
- Please state the research question clearly.
- I am very confused about your research topic. Are you talking about prevalence, mortality or hospitalization? Be coherent.
- Do not include the discussion or summary of the article here. This should go either introduction or conclusion section.
- Revise section 3.1 by including the name of x-axis and y-axis.
  The chart on page 8 should go to section 1.2.
- Article 1 is not relevant because it is a review study. Find another one.
- Article 2 is not relevant because the outcome is risk (incidence), not mortality. Find another one.
- Article 3 is not relevant because the outcome is risk (incidence), not mortality. Find another one.
- Revise section 3.1 by including the name of x-axis and y-axis.
- 1.4. Please state the research question clearly.
- I am very confused about your research topic. Are you talking about prevalence, mortality or hospitalization? Be coherent. ( my topic is hospitalization)
  
  Work on the reference page and in-text citations using APA citation style.
  
  I will have everything that’s needed for revise. An example of the paper will be below and paper need to be finished with the completed revise and have a conclusion and reference page. The conclusion I have must be delected and re written. Any wish please ask.