Revise doctoral capstone PowerPoint using professor feedback and add implementation framework and data visual

Overview

I am looking for assistance revising and improving a PowerPoint presentation for my Doctor of Healthcare Administration (DHA) capstone at Morehouse School of Medicine. The presentation topic is Mental Health First Aid and its Impact on Rural Mississippi Communities.

My professor provided detailed feedback indicating that the presentation concept is strong, but the deck needs significant improvement in visual quality, structure, and analytical depth. I would like your help addressing the following revisions.

First, the overall visual design and professionalism of the slides need to be improved. Several slides contain grammatical inconsistencies, formatting issues, and punctuation errors. These should be corrected so the language reflects a professional doctoral-level presentation. In addition, some slides currently feel like placeholders or teleprompter prompts. These should be redesigned with stronger visual elements such as icons, charts, graphics, or layouts that support the content rather than relying heavily on text.

Second, several slides currently repeat similar ideas about barriers to mental health care (provider shortages, stigma, transportation barriers, broadband access). These slides should be consolidated into clearer, stronger visuals that present the information more effectively and reduce redundancy.

Third, the presentation needs to include more data visualization and evidence-based graphics. My professor recommended including visuals such as:

A chart showing suicide trends in Mississippi

A map or visualization showing mental health provider shortages in Mississippi

Data visualization showing rural mental health access gaps

Statistics related to broadband access and barriers to telehealth

Numerical evidence supporting the impact of Mental Health First Aid training

Fourth, the solution section of the presentation must be strengthened with clear operational and strategic structure. Specifically, the revised slides should include:

An implementation framework showing how Mental Health First Aid could be deployed in rural Mississippi communities

A step-by-step operational roadmap for implementing the program

A timeline for rollout or program phases

Evaluation metrics showing how program success could be measured

A sustainability model explaining how the program would continue long-term

A high-level cost or feasibility estimate for implementing the initiative

Fifth, the overall slide structure should be tightened to ensure the presentation flows logically from:

1. Personal story and problem context
2. Evidence and data on rural mental health disparities
3. Explanation of Mental Health First Aid
4. Implementation strategy and system redesign
5. Evaluation and sustainability
6. Final vision and call to action

My professor also recommended reducing the number of slides with single phrases and replacing them with stronger analytical slides that combine ideas and present them visually.

Deliverables I am looking for:

A professionally redesigned PowerPoint deck

Improved slide layouts and visual storytelling

Data visualization where appropriate

Corrected grammar and formatting

Consolidation of repetitive slides

Addition of implementation, evaluation, and feasibility sections

The goal is to elevate this presentation to a doctoral-level capstone standard while keeping the emotional narrative of the opening story intact.

Please let me know if you need the original PowerPoint file and professor feedback notes to begin.