Overview
So I explained it in the title so I am going to drop in the files my professor feedback and my paper you are simply looking on the feedback paper and changing everything my professor said change. But my professor hand writing is in cursive so I need you to be able to read cursive in order to complete the assignment PLEASE follow the feedback but if you have any questions let me know. (Also, I know this might sound dumb but make me sound like stupid but it makes sense). The better it is the more of a tip I will give you