Overview
hi again, my teacher has made some more notes on the essay. If it would be possible to please review them and fix what needs to be changed. Thank you .
Abstract needs to be only 150 words ——-
Speak about the niches in the introduction, like how male receive more views in certain niches ——-
Gender segregation theory needs to mentioned in the introduction and more elaborated on——-
This one is important!!! Each paragraph can only have 8 lines ——-
In contrast, antithesis———
Explain why micro infiuncere are an important addition to the literarature in the introduction———-
Introduction -one paragraph on thesis - one on antithesis- and third how im going to do it—- 3 paragraphs only.
Literature needs a headline—— gender segregation theory and its criticism
Gender segregation theory- gender segregation theory in social media -literature review———
Studies say…. in contrast—- antithesis
thank you