Overview
Attached are the comments on the revised annotated bibliography. Please FIX THESE!!!! Last time we fixed it, it was still not good. I need a 5-7 pages draft. Please carefully write this, if this turns out good I will make sure you are happy with the money you receive at the end, the final paper for this is really important.
Please read all the comments for the professor and make sure to do the correct research. Let me know if you have any questions. Also the formatting of the paper is very very important!!!!
This draft should focus on describing the philosophical conversation you want to enter into.