Overview
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ARGUMENTS/CONTENTS (3.75/5)
1.25 point per argument
- Your second weakness of democracy, that "it does not guarantee economic equality", is not a strong argument, since it does not apply to specifically to democracies. In fact, full democracies are on average much more equal than autocracies. Therefore, this argument doesn't stand. See for more details: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_countries_by_income_inequality
STRUCTURE & ELEMENTS OF PAPER (4.5/5)
- issue with one quote
- Fukuyama missing from Works Cited
LANGUAGE (4/5)