Overview
Greetings are you able to help me make this qualitative across the board. I added in data and my teacher said that there is no need for it. For example, on page 9 I inputted the standard deviation and he said that it's unnecessary being that it is not a qualitative study. I just need help with organizing it. These are some notes I took yesterday from him:
Not too much on theory
Some sections are duplicated
I can't use the term "construct" and turn around and use "concept". It has to be the same language throughout.
Take out measurement because I am not measuring anything and it is qualitative(concept)
Don't go from article to article. All articles must be cited throughout the paper. References are at the end of the paper and has to be cited within the paper
Don't report on the number of people
Talk about why FOMO is relevant to the age group of young adults (use Ericson intimacy psychosocial)
Paper has to flow so that the reader does not get lost