504, W5 revise your case brief

Riley:

You needed to paste the article as set forth in the instructions to show you found it on Nexis Uni or Fastcase.

I do not see your critique.

For this assignment, you needed to locate a law review article from within the past five years that discusses electronic legal research. You were asked to deconstruct the article into its primary elements, namely:

The Research Question; The Thesis; The Claims or argument; The Evidence or supporting facts; and, The Conclusion(s).

The article touched upon electronic research, and that was good.

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Review the instructions about using the Microsoft highlighting feature as required.

You made a good effort touching upon the issues set forth in the assignment.What was the evidence? The supporting facts?

You made some fine points regarding the author's argument and presentation.

Start a new paragraph for each new theme, idea, or issue. Shorter paragraphs will make your points clearer and easier to follow.

Just an FYI: The Bluebook, pages 157-158 for law review citations.

Keep your sentences short and proofread your work out loud. Avoid writing in the first person.