Overview
Please make ALL of the requested revisions. Then, submit it to the Week 6 assignment folder. I will review it again and likely have more changes for you.
If you make those and submit the revised version in Week 8, I should be able to send it to the Second committee member for an informal review..
I've reviewed the draft up to the end of the lit review.
However, I wanted you to get this so, if you have time, you can start cleaning up the lit rev.
Please revise EXACTLY, as the edits show.
I received an approved Prospectus and could see exactly what the PD was looking for.
For instance, in (a), you need ONLY the citation and NOTHING else.
In (b), you note what the article was about, BUT do not start with the author(s) names. It is a continuation of (a).
In (c), you mention the findings. In (d), you say how the article is relevant to your proposed research.
Keep it concise and reduce the verbosity.
Also, you noted the words 'Conceptual Framework' between the first two summaries. To which does it belong?
You must say IN THE SUMMARY that the article will help the development of your conceptual framework.
Also, where are the articles on your theories? You need two articles on Taylor's scientific management and individual differences perspective theory.