Overview
I received the following feedback from my professor:
“I am puzzled about the Results as there was so much commented on in the first submission and what I see here is a bit of reshuffling. There is very little substantial change. Almost all the text is the same, just shifted around.
+0.5 as I cannot really give many additional marks. The Discussion is a good start. The interpretations need strengthening and a better limitation/future direction is warranted. Please make sure to read and address the comments left in text.”
After revising based on your previous suggestions, my grade actually went down. I invited you again—would you be able to help me revise this properly and thoroughly this time?