Questions
- The Abstract must be revised to include the summary of the entire project, results included. 2.Pay close attetnion ot future vs past tense. There are a few instances where this needs to be updated. See in-text comments for guidance
- See in-text notes.
- There are several areas needing attention. I left comments for those in the attached text. Please provide additional information where requested and/or make the appropriate revisions. Remember, this study is complete, and you have specific findings to highlight.
- References must be double spaced. I fouind a few references with the wrong dates and also found a few sources listed that are not in the text. Please check the entire list for validity. 6.Some heading and alignment issues must be corrected. 7.Look carefully at the comments I left about using conjunctive adverbs such as hence, therefore, moreover, etc. You should use those sparingly or not at all. There are far too many, and they detract from the professionalism of your writing. Please revise them throughout the manuscript.
You have a very comprehensive project, but I left several notes within the text to help guide you to a better one. Please follow the notes carefully and make the necessary edits to the document before submitting for the final version. My comments are very specific and meant to drive your manuscript as close to perfect as it can be so please follow them carefully. Be sure to check the entire document again for the same issues I pointed out and might have missed.
If There is something you need me to help with to give more insight about the project Let me know. Tell me what aprt of the paper I need to provided you with additional information.