Overview
Hi again, I need some more edits on my current essay. My teacher has made these comments.
The abstract needs to be 150 words ——-
Speak about the niches in the introduction like how men can generate higher in certain niches——-
Needs to speak more on Gender segregation theory——-
Each paragraph needs to be 8 lines!!!! ——-
Introduction needs to look like - thesis- antithesis- Third paragraph how was the study conducted—— 3 paragraphs
In contrast, antithesis———
Explain why micro infiuncere are an important addition to the literarature in the introduction———-
Literature needs a headline—— gender segregation theory and its criticism
Gender segregation theory- gender segregation theory in social media -literature review———
Studies say…. in contrast—- antithesis
can these edits please be done to the current essay. keeping the same writing language, simple and to the point. Thank you.